[Report This]Date: September 05, 2010 6:58 PM Title: Small step for a boy
This is so funny!!! The wholetime Sara is trying to reassure and sooth Michael only for her to burst into tears lol!
Author's Response: Lol, that was the general idea. ;) Mom's are usually like that, they handle the tough situation and then break down sobbing once everything is over and they are finally 'allowed'.;)
[Report This]Date: September 04, 2010 12:18 AM Title: Small step for a boy
what a wonderful little story about the way their life should have gone
Thanks Liz, stories like this always make me smile,
looking forward to more
Kylie
Author's Response: Thank you Kylie!:)) I am glad you enjoy reading such stories, I enjoy writing them.:) Hope to be able to offer more soon.:) Until then, take care. xxx
[Report This]Date: September 03, 2010 6:06 PM Title: Small step for a boy
This was beautiful. Tender and funny and very THEM.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am glad you think they were in character, I am always worried about that.:)
Date: September 03, 2010 12:35 PM Title: Small step for a boy
Great story, as always! Keep it going!
Author's Response: Thank you.:) I will, dont worry.;)
[Report This]Date: September 03, 2010 8:39 AM Title: Small step for a boy
Love this, it was so touching and their reactions were so in character. I love reading about them as a happy family..makes me smile
Author's Response: Thank you danni.:) Its always nice to be able to ignore the canon and write something happy from the future for them.:)
[Report This]Date: August 18, 2010 5:08 PM Title: Making Good on Promises
awww so cute, i'll keep reading this
Author's Response: :) Thank you Thania.
[Report This]Date: August 18, 2010 2:52 PM Title: Making Good on Promises
Lovely story, glad to see you still writing
Author's Response: Yeah, I am!:) I knoow, I am taking hoorible pauses, but I try to update when I can. I even managed to update Fence Talks, how cool is that? *LOL*
[Report This]Date: August 18, 2010 10:20 AM Title: Making Good on Promises
very cute, love this vision of michael. And Sara was very funny
Author's Response: Lol, thanks. Yeah, I like to think that sara is a very funny person who simply loves to tease her man.;)
[Report This]Date: August 18, 2010 10:18 AM Title: The price to pay
Loved how this brouhgt us back to Michael in the car..when Sucre asked him if he was alrihgt. You really got what we hoped he was feeling soen nicely
Author's Response: Thank you very much Danni. I really hoped Michael would be feeling something like this and that he wouldnt take saras sacrifice lightly, even if he DIDNT have fallen in love with her. That added on top of things, he would probably think about her far more than he could allow himself to.
[Report This]Date: August 18, 2010 7:24 AM Title: Making Good on Promises
That was just too cute!
Author's Response: Thanks.:)
[Report This]Date: August 17, 2010 7:15 PM Title: Making Good on Promises
Awww! Beautiful, just beatiful...
Author's Response: Thank youu.:)
Date: February 05, 2010 8:19 PM Title: The price to pay
Ah yes!!!! The regret is so deep......As diehard fans of the show, we interpreted that that was how Michael was feeling, but to see it described so well in words........ Well done!!
Author's Response: Hey debbie! Thank you very much for your kind words.:)It was a spur of a moment kind of thing after seeing some caps from that episode, so it kind of flowed out of me.:)
Date: January 26, 2010 11:25 PM Title: A Hero's Weakness
This was just too cute!!!! *sighs* They are just perfect together - can read each other like they have been together forever - when in PB time, it hasn't even been a year....
This is the first time I have come across these one-shots/stories. I will now have to go back and read them all when time permits. At least I now know the 'title' and can refer to it whenever...
Thanks again......xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your extremely nice words! Youre most welcome, and THANK YOU, for the nice words as well as taking the time to read and review. Getting feedback makes your work seem more real, more open, so it always makes my heart flutter with joy when I see a new review. Thank you and hope youll enjoy the rest of the stories as well.:) liz
[Report This]Date: January 25, 2010 3:01 PM Title: A Hero's Weakness
awwwwwww this is soooo cute!!! lol i find it extremely funny that it is michael and not sara who is crazing something really badly lol. thank god for sara huh!?
Author's Response: Yep, thank God for her.;) And thank YOU for your lovely review too.:)
[Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 10:05 PM Title: Her Ultimate Agenda
oooooo I like this one. She's thinking all these thoughts, terrified and worried and nervous of what's to happen in the future, thinking she won't survive it, little does she know she's blessed with what I think is the only thing that will keep her going.
Awesome fic!!
Have a very nice holiday!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, poor sara, she feels so lonely, when she is already carrying her baby and doesnt even know it.Though even so, this is not the ending i have wished for them.:( Thats why there is fanfiction though, right?;) So in my world, no freaking tumor, no freaking death.:)rnrnAlso, wish you also the most wonderful christmas,dear!!!
[Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 10:28 AM Title: Tell Me Who I am
That was a cute chapter too. The fact that Sara realizes that all that she has been through has changed her, but Michael tells her that he still loves her is so sweet. These really are little story that should have been addressed, but never was in the show. Thanks for sharing.
Also I'm still torn on the Bellick thing...sure he tried to be a better person, but I keep seeing him in Fox River and what he use to do. He was a big Jerk!
:( I have to go get ready to go, but this was a fun little walk down Misa memory lane. I'll have to do more re-reading later. :)
Author's Response: Lol, you are welcome dear, my stories arent going anywhere.:) Also, about bellick, I would take pitty on the poor guy. In Fox River, theyve all needed to play their role, look at bob, he was 'too weak' and look what it got him. Even sara was 'playing her role', michael was too, fox river was like a giant high school where everybody had to play a role to get to hang out with their gang.:) I wouldnt judge him there too harshly. Also, when you look at brads life, living in his mommas basement, what was there left for him to turn into? And in the end, he chose to do the right thing, never really hurt anybody (despite claiming otherwise, he never harmed maricruz, even when he could). Yes, he was cowardly and selfcentered and angry and envious, but thats what he was, didnt make im ultimately a bad person. lol, sorry for the ramble, just my thoughts on brad, course you are free to think what you like.:)
[Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 10:09 AM Title: GPS
"And once again, Michael Scofield cannot understand how this one precious thing in his life - this thing that keeps him alive and going and hoping every damned day - could click so easily and perfectly into place, and still blossom beautifully under such crude and grave circumstances."
*dies* I want him!!!! :) *sighs* So sweet!!!
Author's Response: Lol hunny, EVERYBODY wants him, so get back in line please! ;)))
[Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 10:04 AM Title: Arrogance
So I'm bored and decided that this is the perfect story to open up and read because it's a bunch of one-shots and I won't have to be sucked into re-read a whole story. Anyways so I'm just going to open random chapters and read and this is my first one. Did any of that make sence?
Anyways this was so cute. I love to see Sara and Sucre interaction. Also the way sara basically stode up of women all over the world was awesome. Can't guys see that as much as we love sweet romance sometime, we are just as strong as they are. Loved it!! :)
Author's Response: Lolol, you are to sweet ashley.:))) Thank you always for taking the time not only to read, but also to comment.*hugs you supertight*
[Report This]Date: December 20, 2009 3:33 PM Title: Her Ultimate Agenda
She is scared out of her mind at the thought of being left behind, of being left completely alone. No family, no friends, no love, and not a single person left to care if she breathes another day...this is how the writer's basiclly ended our show...great story, loved h ow you took sara's feelings and made them deeper and gave them a more concrete feeling
Author's Response: Aw, thank you for your kind words dear, yes, I think sara was the character who came short the most in the whole series, a lonely pregnant widdow left to take care of herself and shoulder all the happiness as well as sorrow of impeding motherhood alone. Not fair.:(
Date: December 20, 2009 12:41 PM Title: Her Ultimate Agenda
What a great story, it was so Sara--her going from always being alone to desperetly not ever wanting to be alone again, it was very well done. I don't know about you, but by the end of season 4 it felt like MiSa was barely there anymore, the writes robbed us of a lot of great potential scenes. Thank you for continuing to write fanfic!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I know exactly what you mean about the end of S4, the writters concetrated only on wrapping up the story instead of wrapping up the faiths of the characters themselves, adn it was painful to watch how saras character came short the most, being left a lonely widow with a child on the way, no matter how glad to be pregnant, that was never the way she wished it to be.*sigh* damn you writters! Also, you are most welcome, I am definitely going to continue writting fic.:)